Weep, willow,
water is dying,
disregard,
hateful thought,
life blood of mother as black
as our hearts.
Love, listen,
to waters message,
compassion,
true respect,
will wash away mothers woe
forever.
In response to Jane Dougherty Writes poetry prompt : Shadorma
and d’Verse poetry prompt : Ecopoetry
Love the sentiment, and I hope you’re right 🙂
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A lovely response to the prompt.
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I love your poetry and the beauty in your living weeping willow. I had one that was taken in the winter as a silhouette. Your comment was beautiful on mine. I enjoyed the reflection in your words. Water needs to be taken better care of, as you mentioned. We need to remember to not pollute and try to keep track of companies that are not careful of their refuse and damage done by drainage of dangerous chemicals. Hugs, Robin
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Lovely comment Robin. When I first read about ‘messages in water’ research by Dr Emoto Samaru, my perspective changed dramatically. He died a year ago but he wrote a book, and made youtube videos. x
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Lovely poem.
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Beautiful.
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A meaningful message of love, compassion and respect for nature ~ Thanks for sharing and joining us at D’verse ~
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I like the message in your poem – that we need to listen to what nature is trying to tell us! There is so much wisdom if only we are ready to hear.
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Wonderfully wise.
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The willow weeping for the water. A touching and relevant piece.
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Nature should be exactly how to be… to follow with the stream instead of going against the water
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I love this. I understand it completely.
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Beautiful. I LOVE weeping willows. So much.
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Lifeblood of mother as black as our hearts – that line cuts like a knife…very powerful words.
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It helps me considerably to know your reaction, thankyou for your comment.
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Baptism in the air
and water
without
scripture
or even
one word..
Air and Water
SpRinG eternal
now.. aWay
from eYes
oF cOld..
flows
spiRit
Youth
returning..
heArt and SoUl..:)
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Lovely, thankyou.
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SMiLes.. Thank you and welcome.. My friend..:)
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